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From zen and the art of MM :

IDEA NUMBER 2

About half way through the story, narrator has conversation with John Sutherland (current friend) and DeWeese (Phaerdrus’ friend) this would mark a transition in the story itself

IDEA NUMBER 2

Alternating paragraph styles (sing-song and clipped vs. verbose, allegorical & hyperbolic vs. factual, visceral, male-view vs. female perspective)